The feed back I received from my Prelim Task is that the content was appropriate to the task, however the layout wasn't too appealing. People commented on the fact that the stories included were well varied, and therefore suited different personalities of students. Feedback suggested the image I used was appropriate, as it wasn't gender specific, suited the age gap, and had a positive tone to it. However, people didn't like how it restricted the text to the bottom of the page, as it meant there were less cover lines. They suggested this would mean less people would be attracted, as there isn't as much to draw people in to reading the magazine. For my main task, I will consider the image I used and ensure I can place text either side of the image and include more.
The content was said to be specific to the type of magazine I created, which is something I need to maintain for my main task. People also commented on the layout of the photo's, and said there was a sufficient amount, however they could be more spread out across the page. As for the background, peer's agreed with me that the white was too plain, and colour was needed.
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